Det vibrerte omkring hans munn, som om han i sin store rådløshet var på gråten.
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His mouth was trembling, as if in his great helplessness, he was about to cry.
Translated by markvanroode 588 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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It vibrated around his mouth, as if in his great helplessness, he was about to cry.
Translated by markvanroode 588 1 month, 2 weeks ago

Discussion

Thanks, David.

by markvanroode 1 month, 2 weeks ago

"It vibrated around his mouth" sounds odd in English but creative. "His mouth was trembling" is more typical if ordinary.

by DavidKenstad 1 month, 2 weeks ago