Ja, svarte den fremmede med et sukk, likesom han oppløstes innvendig fra, jeg har det ikke godt.
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"Yes," the stranger replied with a sigh, sounding as if he was falling apart inside. "I'm not feeling well."
Translated by markvanroode 258 1 month, 2 weeks ago

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Thanks, David. I'll stick with the current translation.

by markvanroode 1 month, 2 weeks ago

Or you could say "...as if he were dissolving from within..." which is a more literal translation, but maybe the author wanted to convey this more dramatic image.

by DavidKenstad 1 month, 2 weeks ago