» Il la regrettait cette écluse Saint-Martin.
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He missed that Saint-Martin lock.
Translated by marina 20707 1 week ago
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He missed this Saint-Martin lock.
Translated by marina 20707 1 week, 2 days ago

Discussion

Of course. Don't know why I wrote this.
Thanks Wendy

by marina 1 week ago

Suggestion Marina:
He missed that Saint-Martin lock.
The word 'this' tends to confuse the reader as to which Lock he is referring to, because 'this' suggests the present time and place, whereas 'that' immediately refers the reader back to the lock in the stories his father used to tell him.

by Merlin57 1 week ago