L’âpreté de mes sollicitudes pour vous, je l’ai trop franchement exprimée ; Lélia ; j’ai blessé la sublime pudeur de votre âme.
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Too frankly I have expressed the intensity of my solicitude for you, Lélia; I have hurt the sublime modesty of your soul.
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Oplusse 34701
2 months ago
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I have expressed too frankly the bitterness of my solicitude for you, Lélia; I have hurt the sublime modesty of your soul.
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Oplusse 34701
2 months, 1 week ago
Discussion
Suggestion Pierre: I think 'intensity of my solicitude' would be better, because 'bitterness' is somehow contrary to 'solicitude' in this context.
by Merlin57 2 months agoIt could also be written as follows:
Too frankly I have expressed the intensity of my solicitude for you, . . .