Barbarita abría cada ojo como los de un ternero cuando su mamá, sentándola sobre el mostrador, le enseñaba abanicos sin dejárselos tocar; y se embebecía contemplando aquellas figuras tan monas, que no le parecían personas, sino _chinos_, con las caras redondas y tersas como hojitas de rosa, todos ellos risueños y estúpidos, pero muy lindos, lo mismo que aquellas casas abiertas por todos lados y aquellos árboles que parecían matitas de albahaca... ¡Y pensar que los árboles eran el té nada menos, estas hojuelas retorcidas, cuyo zumo se toma para el dolor de barriga...!
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Barbarita  opened each eye like a calf's when her mother, sitting her on the counter, showed her fans without letting her touch them; and she would become engrossed in contemplating those cute figures, which didn't seem like people to her, but rather  'Chinese', with round, smooth faces like rose petals, all of them smiling and silly, but very pretty, just like those houses open on all sides and those trees that looked like little basil plants... And to think that the trees were actually tea, those twisted leaves whose juice is taken for stomach aches...!
Translated by tontonjl 36418 1 month, 1 week ago
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Barbarita' eyes widened like those of a calf when her mother, sitting her at the counter, taught her about fans without letting her touchany; and she absorbed it all, looking at those figures, so cute that she did not see them as people, but "Chinese", with round faces as smooth as rose petals, all of them laughing and stupid, but very cute, the same as those houses open aon all sides and those trees that looked like little bushes of basil... And to think that the trees were nothing less than tea, these twisted little leaves, whose juice is taken for a stomachache...!
Translated by marina 42727 1 month, 1 week ago
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je vois que nous nous marchons sur les pieds, ça tombe bien j'avais arrêté là. 😉🖐
Translated by tontonjl 36418 1 month, 1 week ago

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Tu as du oublier de la valider comme ça m'arrive si souvent.

by tontonjl 1 month, 1 week ago

Ce que je ne comprends pas c'est où est passée la remarque que j'avais mise ce matin, pour te présenter mes excuses et signaler qu'il y avait une erreur ( Barbarita's eyes ) dans ma phrase, que j'avais décidé de ne pas corriger pour que seule ta version soit validée. :-(

by marina 1 month, 1 week ago