Un día estuvo doña Inés tan sentimental, que deshizo el peinado de Juanita, admiró su abundante, undosa y suave mata de pelo, la besó varias veces, calificó de horrible desacato el que las manos rudas e impuras de un campesino lograsen tocarla y enredar los dedos en ella,.
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One day, Doña Inés was so sentimental that she undid Juanita's hairstyle, admired her abundant, wavy, and soft mane of hair, kissed her several times, and considered it a horrible disgrace that the rough and impure hands of a peasant could touch and entangle their fingers in it,
Translated by markvanroode 10195 10 months ago
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One day, Doña Inés was so sentimental that she undid Juanita's hairstyle, admired her abundant, wavy, and soft mane of hair, kissed her several times, and considered it a horrible disgrace that the rough and impure hands of a peasant could touch her and entangle their fingers in her,
Translated by markvanroode 10195 10 months ago

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Gracias.

by markvanroode 10 months ago

Yes, it seems logical. But then, the first "her" has to be replaced, too. "could touch and entangle their fingers in her hair/ touch it and entangle their fingers in it,

by marina 10 months ago

in her hair ( I think)

by Boot2 10 months ago