Ihm schien, daß die Augen des Mannes, als er das Zimmer verließ, nach dem Wandschirm blickten.
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It seemed to him that as the man left the room, he was glancing at the screen.
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Strydom • 65
6 months, 3 weeks ago
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He noticed that as the man left the room, he glanced at the wall screen.
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Strydom • 65
6 months, 4 weeks ago
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by anitafunny 6 months, 3 weeks agoDanke, ihr Allezusammen.
by Strydom 6 months, 3 weeks agoDanke dir
by anitafunny 6 months, 4 weeks agoConsistent with previous parts of the text, only Schirm (screen) was used ...
by DrWho 6 months, 4 weeks agoJames.. only... screen..? Nicht.. Wall Screen?
by anitafunny 6 months, 4 weeks agoI used continuous past tense, "was glancing" because it conveys in English an action that was simultaneous with the act of leaving the room.
by DrWho 6 months, 4 weeks agoHere's my suggestion: It seemed to him that as the man left the room, he was glancing at the screen. ...
by DrWho 6 months, 4 weeks agoSuggestion... It seemed to him that the man's eyes, as he left the room, were looking towards the wall screen...??...
by anitafunny 6 months, 4 weeks agoAber ich denke, James als Muttersprachler sollte es lieber überprüfen.