Ihm schien, daß die Augen des Mannes, als er das Zimmer verließ, nach dem Wandschirm blickten.
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It seemed to him that as the man left the room, he was glancing at the screen.
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Strydom • 65
10 months, 4 weeks ago
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He noticed that as the man left the room, he glanced at the wall screen.
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Strydom • 65
11 months ago
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Gerne geschehen ☺️
by anitafunny 10 months, 4 weeks agoDanke, ihr Allezusammen.
by Strydom 10 months, 4 weeks agoDanke dir
by anitafunny 11 months agoConsistent with previous parts of the text, only Schirm (screen) was used ...
by DrWho 11 months agoJames.. only... screen..? Nicht.. Wall Screen?
by anitafunny 11 months agoI used continuous past tense, "was glancing" because it conveys in English an action that was simultaneous with the act of leaving the room.
by DrWho 11 months agoHere's my suggestion: It seemed to him that as the man left the room, he was glancing at the screen. ...
by DrWho 11 months agoSuggestion... It seemed to him that the man's eyes, as he left the room, were looking towards the wall screen...??...
by anitafunny 11 months agoAber ich denke, James als Muttersprachler sollte es lieber überprüfen.