Fordi huset så ut bare som en mengde av mørke, fikk lysblinkene noe levende over seg, lik øyne som skiftet palass i mørket.
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Because the house appeared as nothing more than a mass of darkness, the flashes of light took on a living quality—like eyes that switched palaces in the dark.
- The lack of punctuation, keeping this unit within the same paragraph as the previous unit, would normally indicate that it is part of Ann-Mari's comments and should still be within quotation marks. But the text is clearly the author's remark, not that of his character, Ann-Mari. So the ending quotation marks belong on the end of the previous unit. This should be a new paragraph, and that may actually be the case in the original published version. We have already seen other examples of such anomalies in the .epub electronic file.
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