Jo, så husket losoldermannen ham.
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Yes indeed, then the master-pilot remembered him.
- Take the quotation mark out because Andreas finished what he was saying in the previous unit and here the master-pilot is thinking.
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DavidKenstad • 957
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Yes indeed." Then the master-pilot remembered him.
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DavidKenstad • 957
2 weeks, 4 days ago
Discussion
Correction - I meant Andreas finished talking at the end of the previous unit. Here is the way it looks in the novel:
Andreas nevnte et navn til:
– Husker du Gustav?
– Gustav? – Han tenkte seg om.
– Lille Gustav til Stina på skjæret.
Jo, så husket losoldermannen ham.
by DavidKenstad 2 weeks, 1 day agoNeither. The master-pilot is not talking here. He finished talking at the end of the previous unit. Here is is thinking/remembering only.
by DavidKenstad 2 weeks, 1 day agoShould we use quotation marks before and after the thought? "Yes indeed," then the master-pilot remembered him. Or 'Yes indeed,' then the master-pilot remembered him.
by markvanroode 2 weeks, 2 days ago