Dette stadig skiftende og vikende utdypet det ukjente og fremmedartede ved ham.
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This constant change and yielding deepened his unknown and alien nature.
Translated by markvanroode 588 2 months, 1 week ago
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This constantly changing and receding deepened the unknown and alien nature of him.
Translated by markvanroode 588 2 months, 4 weeks ago

Discussion

Thanks, David.

by markvanroode 2 months, 1 week ago

How about this: "This constantly changing and yielding deepened his unknown and alien nature."
For me, "receding" triggers the thought of a receding hairline;-) And then the use of the possessive pronoun "his" is more natural English here.

by DavidKenstad 2 months, 1 week ago