Alt var galt og forvridd i den lille by, ikke engang ungdommen hadde ungdommens alminnelige og umiddelbare friskhet.
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Everything was wrong and distorted in the little town; not even youth had its usual and immediate freshness.
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markvanroode 366
2 months, 1 week ago
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Everything was wrong and distorted in the little town; not even the youth had its usual and immediate freshness.
Translated by
markvanroode 366
2 months, 1 week ago
Discussion
Thanks, David. I prefer 2) since it avoids the repetition of "youth".
by markvanroode 2 months, 1 week agoOR even better, "...not even the youth had the usual and immediate freshness of youth".
by DavidKenstad 2 months, 1 week ago"...not even the youth had its usual and immediate freshness."
by DavidKenstad 2 months, 1 week agoThere are 3 better possibilities: 1.) "...not even the youth had their usual and immediate freshness" OR 2.) "...not even youth had its usual and immediate freshness" OR 3.) "...not even the youth had youth's usual and immediate freshness". I prefer # 1.).