Det var egentlig ikke noe .endtlig i denne taushet, men det var allikevel, som om de hadde noe å si hverandre, kanskje onde ord, men ingen av dem kom seg til å begynne; det var noe lumsk, dyrisk i deres stillferdige tassen og lusken frem og tilbake.
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There was nothing actually hostile in this silence, but it still felt as if they had something to say to each other, perhaps bad words, yet neither started. There was something insidious, animalistic in their quiet pawing and sneaking back and forth.
Translated by markvanroode 258 1 month, 1 week ago
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The silence was not definitive, but it still felt as if they had something to say to each other, perhaps bad words, yet neither started. There was something insidious, animalistic in their quiet pawing and sneaking back and forth.
Translated by markvanroode 258 1 month, 1 week ago

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David, thanks.

by markvanroode 1 month, 1 week ago

I would suggest this:
There was nothing actually hostile in this silence...

by DavidKenstad 1 month, 1 week ago

Correction: noe .endtlig should be "noe fiendtlig"

by DavidKenstad 1 month, 1 week ago

.endtlig?

by markvanroode 1 month, 1 week ago