Le matin même, sa tante Maria l’avait battu en lui défendant d’aller au bord du fleuve.
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That very morning, his Aunt Maria had beaten him for going down to the riverbank, after she had expressly forbidden it.
Translated by Merlin57 39083 1 week, 4 days ago
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That very morning, his Aunt Maria had given him a chastisng, as a reminder not to go down to the riverbank.
Translated by Merlin57 39083 1 week, 1 day ago

Discussion

Merci Pierre, pour ton aide 😃

by Merlin57 1 week, 1 day ago

Yes, your suggestion sounds good to me. Poor child!

by Oplusse 1 week, 1 day ago

Hello Pierre - Merci, I obviously misunderstood the construction of this sentence!
Could I write instead: That very morning, his Aunt Maria had given him a chastisng to remind him not to go down to the riverbank.
I use the word chastising to indicate that it could involve both verbal and physical 'beating'.

by Merlin57 1 week, 1 day ago

Hi Wendy, in your translation you've added something that isn't in the text—the child didn't go to the riverbank; his aunt simply forbade him from doing so (with all the love and kindness typical of that era).

by Oplusse 1 week, 2 days ago