En suma, doña Inés miraba y estudiaba a Juanita como el sabio crítico, buen gramático y mejor estético mira y estudia un bello poema,.
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In short, Doña Inés looked at and studied Juanita as a wise critic, a good grammarian, and an even better aesthetician looks and studies a beautiful poem,
Translated by markvanroode 7435 5 months, 1 week ago
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In short, Doña Inés looked at and studied Juanita like a wise critic, a good grammarian, and an even better aesthetician looks at and studies a beautiful poem,
Translated by markvanroode 7435 5 months, 1 week ago

Discussion

Just a little thing: "like a wise critic." would be fine, but there is a verb further on, it's a whole clause . We need "as a wise critic,... looks and studies..."

by marina 5 months, 1 week ago