Detrás venía la hija, hecha un sol, con su lindo vestido de seda chinesca, su mantilla de madroños, su alta peineta de concha y un montón de claveles junto a la peineta.
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The daughter followed her, a bright star, in her pretty dress of Chinese silk, her mantilla with tassels, her tall shell comb, and a bunch of carnations next to the comb.
Translated by markvanroode 7435 6 months, 2 weeks ago
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The daughter followed her, a bright star, in her pretty dress of Chinese silk, her strawberry-colored mantilla, her tall shell comb, and a bunch of carnations next to the comb.
Translated by markvanroode 7435 6 months, 2 weeks ago
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Behind came the daughter, transformed into a sun, in her pretty Chinese silk dress, her strawberry-coloured mantilla, her high shell comb with a  bunch of carnations at its side.
Translated by marina 43679 6 months, 2 weeks ago
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The daughter followed her, a bright star, with her pretty dress of Chinese silk, her mantilla of strawberry trees, her tall shell comb, and a bunch of carnations next to the comb.
Translated by markvanroode 7435 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Discussion

:-))

by soybeba 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Thanks, Beba.

by markvanroode 6 months, 2 weeks ago

... Chinese silk, her mantilla with tassels, her tall ... ???
'Madroños' here does not refer to a plant or fruit, but rather a detail on clothing: tassels.

by soybeba 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Will do. Thanks, marina.

by markvanroode 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Sorry Mark I like your version. Just forget the trees and I'll upvote it. I think, literally, it should be "arbutus-coloured mantilla, " but it is a surprising comparison.

by marina 6 months, 2 weeks ago