En los otros vehículos llegaban montañas de panes—cada uno de ellos del tamaño de un grano de maíz ante los ojos del gigante—, pirámides de frutas enormes para los pigmeos, pero que venían a ser del volumen de un cañamón, y montones de quesos.
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On the other vehicles came mountains of bread -each the size of a kernel of corn before the giant's eyes-, pyramids of fruit, huge to the pygmies, but about the volume of a birdseed, and heaps of cheeses.
Translated by soybeba 49132 3 years, 11 months ago
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On the other vehicles came piles of bread -each the size of a kernel of corn before the giant's eyes-, pyramids of fruit huge to the pygmies, but about the volume of a birdseed, and heaps of cheeses.
Translated by soybeba 49132 3 years, 11 months ago

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I've already satisfied both of you 😅

by soybeba 3 years, 11 months ago

I'd put a comma after fruit "pyramids of fruit, huge to the pygmies, but about the volume of a birdseed, a

by marina 3 years, 11 months ago

mountains of bread ( if you used piled up before)

by Boot2 3 years, 11 months ago