Er stürzte auf das Verdeck, um den Kapitän zu holen, und als sie wieder in die Kajüte hinunterkamen, war niemand da, aber sie sahen, daß jemand einen neuen Kurs auf der Karte eingezeichnet hatte.
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He swooped down to the deck in order to fetch the captain, and when they came down to the cabin again, no one was there, but they saw that someone had plotted a new course on the map.
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Hello Tom - Suggestion: He rushed onto the deck to fetch the captain, and when they came back down to the cabin . . .
by Merlin57 5 days, 9 hours agoTo avoid the repetition of 'down'. Usually one goes up onto the deck, and down to the cabin. Also suggest 'rushed' for 'stürzen', because 'swooping' is too reminiscent of a bird 'swooping'.