Aber noch lag das Meer spiegelblank, vom Sonnenuntergang beleuchtet da.
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But the sea still lay, mirror-smooth, illuminated by the sunset.
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markvanroode 8623
4 months, 1 week ago
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But the sea still lay there, mirror-smooth, illuminated by the sunset.
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markvanroode 8623
4 months, 1 week ago
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Wendy, thanks.
by markvanroode 4 months, 1 week agoMark, may I suggest simply: But the sea still lay, mirror-smooth, illuminated by the sunset. (without 'there', otherwise it sounds like the 'sea' is a creature capable of standing up on its own)
by Merlin57 4 months, 1 week ago