Aber noch lag das Meer spiegelblank, vom Sonnenuntergang beleuchtet da.
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But the sea still lay, mirror-smooth, illuminated by the sunset.
Translated by markvanroode 8428 2 months ago
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But the sea still lay there, mirror-smooth, illuminated by the sunset.
Translated by markvanroode 8428 2 months, 1 week ago

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Wendy, thanks.

by markvanroode 2 months ago

Mark, may I suggest simply: But the sea still lay, mirror-smooth, illuminated by the sunset. (without 'there', otherwise it sounds like the 'sea' is a creature capable of standing up on its own)

by Merlin57 2 months ago