Oben in seinem Zimmer lag Dorian Gray auf einem Sofa, Schrecken in jeder Fieber seines zuckenden Körpers.
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Upstairs in his room, Dorian Gray lay on a sofa, terror reflected in every limb of his twitching body.
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DrWho 36749
2 months, 4 weeks ago
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Upstairs in his room, Dorian Gray lay on a sofa, terror in every twitch of his feverish body.
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DrWho 36749
2 months, 4 weeks ago
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danke vielmals 🥰
by anitafunny 2 months, 3 weeks agoI like your suggestion - I'll stick with "terror" rather than "fear" - It paints a stronger picture ... Thank you!
by DrWho 2 months, 4 weeks agoIch glaube, Fieber ist hier nicht gemeint, wahrscheinlich in jedem Glied seines Körpers ( in allen Gliedern...)... Vielleicht so... Upstairs in his room, Dorian Gray lay on a sofa, fear reflected in every limb of his twitching body....??
by anitafunny 2 months, 4 weeks ago