Wolkenlos, von einem einzigen Stern durchstochen, glimmte ein kupfern grüner Himmel durch die Scheiben.
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Cloudless, pierced by a single star, a copper-green sky glowed through the windows.
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James.. schimmerte = glimmered... finde ich aber auch romantischer und treffender.. Peater hatte einen guten Vorschlag 👍
by anitafunny 5 months agoThanks, but Ill leave it the way it is.
by DrWho 5 months agoConcur with that. Then consider, " ... a copper-green sky glimmered through the windows." Glimmer indicates a paler, weaker and more romantic "glow". "Glow" would suggest a constant dim illumination such as from an airplane's instruments.
by Strydom 5 months agoI love the word-pictures Oscar Wilde paints!
by DrWho 5 months ago