Es sah direkt aus, als wollte sich das seltsame Luftfahrzeug in die Wellen stürzen, als sei es verunglückt, als müsse es jeden Augenblick im Schwarzen Meer versinken.
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'It looked as if the strange aircraft were crippled and about to crash into the Black Sea, to sink beneath the waves at any moment.
Translated by markvanroode 8413 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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It looked as if the strange aircraft were about to plunge into the waves, as if it had crashed, as if it would sink into the Black Sea at any moment.
Translated by markvanroode 8413 8 months ago

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Sounds better. Thanks, Wendy.

by markvanroode 7 months, 3 weeks ago

Mark, I wonder about - 'as if it had crashed' - in the context it sounds like a contradiction, as it has not yet hit 'crashed into' the water, what do you think of:
'It looked as if the strange aircraft were crippled and about to crash into the Black Sea, to sink beneath the waves at any moment.

by Merlin57 7 months, 3 weeks ago