Ich drücke meinen linken Fuß daneben ein, und wie ich ihn zurückziehe, sehe ich, daß mein Fuß ein wenig, etwa ein halbes Zentimeter oder so, länger ist als die beiden Abdrücke.
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I pushed my left foot in next to them, and as I withdrew it, I see that my foot is a little longer than both footprints, by about half a centimeter or so.
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1 year ago
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Hello Tom, to keep ithe narrative in the same tense, this sentence really needs to read:
by Merlin57 11 months, 2 weeks agoI push my left foot into the earth next to them, and as I withdraw it, I see that my foot is a little longer than both footprints by about half a centimetre or so.
I would also tend to add 'into the earth', to make clearer what he is doing to the reader. ?