Denn daß Ihr etwas Gutes geträumt habt, war ja doch auf Euerem Gesicht zu lesen; habe ich Euch doch schon lange betrachtet, wie Ihr so dalagt!"
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One could see from your face that you'd had a good dream; I watched you for a long time as you lay there.
Translated by Merlin57 4435 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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One could see from your face that you had dreamt something good; I watched you for a long time as you lay there.
Translated by Merlin57 4435 4 weeks, 1 day ago

Discussion

Sorry dann war ich halt zu schnell..aber vielleicht ist es dir jetzt angenehm, Wendy??.habe nun 3 Wochen gewartet.. lach!!

by anitafunny 1 week, 1 day ago

The up-vote came too quickly. I often come back to a sentence hours later with another, improved version after mulling over it for several hours, or I re-read what I have written and I am not happy with it. The first sentence gefällt mir nicht ganz so gut, weil es mir irgendwie holprig klingt.

by Merlin57 4 weeks, 1 day ago