Sie wird meiner nicht achten, und mir wird das Herz brechen.«
»Das ist wirklich der treue Liebhaber«, sagte die Nachtigall.
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She won't pay attention to me, and my heart will break." "That indeed is the true lover," said the nightingale.
- Danke James
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anitafunny • 36614
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She won't pay attention to me, and she will break my heart." "That indeed is the true lover," said the nightingale.
- Bernards Version..gefällt mir besser...bin gespannt, wem noch :-)
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anitafunny • 36614
7 years, 6 months ago
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She won't pay attention to me, and my heart will break." "That indeed is the true lover," said the nightingale. ...
- Small suggestion ... ;-)
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DrWho • 36634
7 years, 6 months ago
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She will have no pay attention of me, and my heart will break." "That indeed is the true lover," said the nightingale.
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anitafunny • 36614
7 years, 6 months ago
Discussion
Yes...but I thought...she...was implied...??...Aber du hast recht Bernard, sollte nochmals betont werden...danke vielmals... freut mich sehr, dass du so einfühlsam bist. ❣
by anitafunny 7 years, 6 months agoBei "my heart will break" geht es nur darum, dass "mein Herz bricht", also "leidet; im deutschen Urspurngstext geht es darum, das "SIE" sein Herz bricht, d.h. die Verursacherin wird betont, deshalb "and she will ...";)
by bf2010 7 years, 6 months agoZunächst danke und sorry..Bernard..aber ist es nicht poetischer?..James hat es genauso formuliert!..oder?
by anitafunny 7 years, 6 months ago.. and she will break my heart."
by bf2010 7 years, 6 months ago