Los pasillos de su gran casa le parecían lúgubres, sólo porque no sonaba
en ellos el estrépito de las pataditas infantiles.
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The hallways of their large house seemed gloomy to her only because the patter of little children's footsteps no longer resounded through them.
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markvanroode 8346
2 days, 8 hours ago
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The hallways of his large house seemed gloomy to her, simply because the clamor of little children's footsteps did not ring out in them.
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markvanroode 8346
2 days, 14 hours ago
Discussion
Or else 'the patter of little children's footsteps...'
by marina 2 days, 9 hours ago"his" is correct, but wouldn't "their" or "her" be more logical in the context ?
by marina 2 days, 10 hours agoWhile you are at it, I link "clamor" with voices rather than footsteps. 'scurry of ..." ?