Y era la gala que aquel jayán, cuando había para ello espacio bastante, porque el paño de la bandera tenía lo menos cuatro varas en cuadro, revolotease la bandera girándola en torno, paralela al suelo,.
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And it was the elegance with which that giant fluttered the banner, turning it around, parallel to the ground, when there was enough space for it, because the flag cloth was at least four yards square,
Translated by markvanroode 7435 6 months, 2 weeks ago
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And it was the elegance with which that giant, when there was enough space for it, because the flag cloth was at least four yards square, fluttered the banner, turning it around, parallel to the ground,
Translated by markvanroode 7435 6 months, 2 weeks ago

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Thanks, Boot. The sentence feels a bit crooked.

by markvanroode 6 months, 2 weeks ago

I voted but I would have put ''fluttered the banner....just after 'giant'

by Boot2 6 months, 2 weeks ago