Er schob sie behutsam weg, und die Hand glitt seinen Hemdärmel entlang.
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He gently pushed it away, and the hand slid down his shirt sleeve.
Translated by markvanroode 8428 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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He gently pushed it away, and his hand slid down his shirt sleeve.
Translated by markvanroode 8428 2 months ago

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Thanks, Wendy.

by markvanroode 1 month, 3 weeks ago

Hi Mark - it was the hand of the stranger that slides down his shirt sleeve. This would be clearer if you used 'the hand' rather than 'his'.
He gently pushed it away, and the hand slid down his shirt sleeve.

by Merlin57 1 month, 3 weeks ago