Er schob sie behutsam weg, und die Hand glitt seinen Hemdärmel entlang.
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He gently pushed it away, and the hand slid down his shirt sleeve.
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markvanroode 8489
2 months, 2 weeks ago
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He gently pushed it away, and his hand slid down his shirt sleeve.
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markvanroode 8489
2 months, 3 weeks ago
Discussion
Thanks, Wendy.
by markvanroode 2 months, 2 weeks agoHi Mark - it was the hand of the stranger that slides down his shirt sleeve. This would be clearer if you used 'the hand' rather than 'his'.
by Merlin57 2 months, 2 weeks agoHe gently pushed it away, and the hand slid down his shirt sleeve.