Er schob sie behutsam weg, und die Hand glitt seinen Hemdärmel entlang.
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He gently pushed it away, and the hand slid down his shirt sleeve.
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markvanroode 8623
3 months, 4 weeks ago
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He gently pushed it away, and his hand slid down his shirt sleeve.
Translated by
markvanroode 8623
4 months ago
Discussion
Thanks, Wendy.
by markvanroode 3 months, 4 weeks agoHi Mark - it was the hand of the stranger that slides down his shirt sleeve. This would be clearer if you used 'the hand' rather than 'his'.
by Merlin57 3 months, 4 weeks agoHe gently pushed it away, and the hand slid down his shirt sleeve.