Er schob sie behutsam weg, und die Hand glitt seinen Hemdärmel entlang.
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He gently pushed it away, and the hand slid down his shirt sleeve.
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markvanroode 8428
1 month, 3 weeks ago
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He gently pushed it away, and his hand slid down his shirt sleeve.
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markvanroode 8428
2 months ago
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Thanks, Wendy.
by markvanroode 1 month, 3 weeks agoHi Mark - it was the hand of the stranger that slides down his shirt sleeve. This would be clearer if you used 'the hand' rather than 'his'.
by Merlin57 1 month, 3 weeks agoHe gently pushed it away, and the hand slid down his shirt sleeve.