Er wurde von einem Schrei unterbrochen, einem heiseren, beinahe brüllenden Schrei, das war die alte Kaisa, die in die Schankstube gekommen war und nun mit gekrümmten Fingern vor ihm stand.
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He was interrupted by a scream, a hoarse, almost roaring scream. It was old Kaisa, who had come into the bar and now stood before him with her fingers clenched.
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markvanroode 8844
10 months, 2 weeks ago
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He was interrupted by a scream, a hoarse, almost roaring scream. It was old Kaisa, who had come into the bar and now stood before him with her fingers curled.
Translated by
markvanroode 8844
11 months ago
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Sounds better. Thanks, Wendy.
by markvanroode 10 months, 2 weeks agoMark, what do you think of : . . . stood before him with her fingers clenched. For me this gives more of an expression of strong emotion, than just 'curled'.
by Merlin57 10 months, 2 weeks ago