Aus der Maske hervor aber blitzten zwei Augen, so unheimlich, so glühend, daß die beiden Herren in der Gondel betroffen zurückprallten.
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But behind the mask two eyes flashed, so eerie, glowing with such intensity that the two men in the gondola recoiled in shock.
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markvanroode 8413
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But two eyes flashed out from behind the mask, so eerie, so glowing, that the two gentlemen in the gondola recoiled in shock.
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markvanroode 8413
9 months, 4 weeks ago
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Thanks, Wendy.
by markvanroode 9 months, 1 week agoBut behind the mask two eyes flashed, so eerie, glowing with such intensity that the two men in the gondola recoiled in shock.
by Merlin57 9 months, 2 weeks ago(I suggest an addition to 'glowing', so as to give more of a sense of eerieness - otherwise 'glowing' has the connotations of beauty, of softness and fullness.)